Revised Introduction

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In this blog post I will be throwing out my current introduction and starting from scratch. In this case, I will be starting my introduction with more information on what makes a good introduction.

New introduction:

If you were given the opportunity to have the potential to save countless lives, would you do it? That is the question that drives scientists and average citizens to fight for the evolution of stem cell research. Stem cells are tiny cells that have the ability to transform themselves into any type of cell your body needs. This is the view that President Obama had when he gave his speech in 2009 approving the government funding of stem cell research. President Obama used his personal faith, patriotism, strong word choice, and pristine organization to help show his more conservative critics that he is doing the right thing.