Paragraph Analysis

Phillips, John F. "The 'Sunny Yellow' street door to Satin's office on busy Spadina Avenue in Toronto, August 1967." 7/31/1967 via wikipedia. Creative Commons Attribution Share Alike 3.0 Unported. 

The "sunny yellow"[23] street door to Satin's office on busy Spadina Avenue in Toronto, August 1967.
I analyzed my quick reference guide in reference to the paragraph analysis guide in the Rules for Writers text. I will be discussing what I learned from looking at my QRG from a different point of view.

My paragraph analysis made me question the need for white space versus everything necessary to include in a paragraph. For the paragraphs that include quotes, I am not sure if I should do the analysis within the same paragraph and make it longer or make a new paragraph and not make more of a conclusion at the end of the paragraph.

I do a good job at stating the intent of the paragraph in the introduction sentence. It guides the reader through the story step by step so they can follow the flow of information.

I can continue to work on little grammar details, but that will hopefully improve with more drafts and read throughs.